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The Process Of Honey Production By Bees

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The Diagram Illustrates Process OF Honey Producation by Bees. overall Process Is Consist OF Seven Consecutive Steps Commencing With Building OF Hive And ending With Water Converted In Vapour Firstly Bees Build a Hive Consist of Many Individually Build Cells, Next Bees Goes to Search Of Flower And Finding Suitable Flower They Collect Nectar From It. Which is Precious Source For Making Honey. In NExt Step Bees Filled Hive By Nectar And Producation Process Begin. Furthremore, Bees Covrered Hives By Their Wings to Coleled Down Nectar At LAst Water evaporate From hive and Only fresh Honey Remain Under Hives And Production Process Complete.
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OF Honey
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Producation
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overall
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Is Consist OF Seven Consecutive Steps Commencing With Building OF Hive And ending With Water Converted In
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Bees Build a Hive Consist of
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Bees Goes to Search Of Flower And Finding Suitable Flower They Collect Nectar From It. Which is Precious Source For Making Honey.

In
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Step Bees Filled Hive By Nectar And
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Producation
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Process
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, Bees
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Hives By Their Wings to
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Down Nectar At
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Water evaporate From hive and
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fresh Honey Remain Under Hives And Production
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4 paragraphs
103 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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