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Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. MMBpp
The bar chart illustrates the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 while the bar chart illustrates the UK and Australian cinema admission between1976 to 2006. Units are measured in admission in millions. Overall, there was an increased in both UK and Australia cinema admission and there were more increased admission to UK when compared to cinema admission in Australia. Furthermore the most popular film screened in UK were US films in 2001. UK cinema admission began 100 million in 1975 and gradual decrease to 60 million in 1985 and rose significantly 175 million in 2005. Australia cinema admission began 35 million in 1975 and climbing steadily 80 million in 2000. In 2001 US films were screened in UK about 75% and Australia 65% respectively. UK films were screened approximately 10% in UK and 5% in Australia. The least films were screened in Australia films about 2% Australia while about 10% in UK. Others films were screened in UK were approximately 3% while 15% in Australia respectively.
The bar chart illustrates the UK and Australian
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cinema
market in 2001 while the bar chart illustrates the UK and Australian
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cinema
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admission
between1976 to 2006. Units
are measured
in
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admission
in millions.

Overall
, there was an increased in both UK and Australia
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cinema
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admission
and there were more increased
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admission
to UK when compared to
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cinema
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admission
in Australia.
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Furthermore
the most popular film screened in UK
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were
US films in 2001.

UK
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cinema
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admission
began 100
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million
in 1975 and gradual decrease to 60
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million
in 1985 and rose
significantly
175
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million
in 2005. Australia
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cinema
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admission
began 35
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million
in 1975 and climbing
steadily
80
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million
in 2000.

In 2001 US films
were screened
in UK about 75% and Australia 65%
respectively
.
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UK films
were screened
approximately 10% in UK and 5% in Australia. The least films
were screened
in Australia films about 2% Australia while about 10% in UK. Others films
were screened
in UK were approximately 3% while 15% in Australia
respectively
.
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IELTS academic Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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