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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. JoK7e
The line graph provides information about population of India and China between 2000 and 2020 whereas the figures is expected to increase and reach in high level. The graph are measured in numbers. Overall, it can be seen that, China experienced a down trend, while India a showed an upward trend throughout the period. Although India initially had a lower rate but it will be outrace chine at the end of the period. To begin with, the number of population increased slowly from around one billions to one and third billions in the first three years. Likewise, the rate of population will be growing which comprised to approximately 1. 5 billions in 2030. In addition, the increasing population will peak out at the end of the period which made up around 1. 6 billions as shown in figures. However, at the beginning of the period, the rate of China were just below 1. 3 billions and it rose gradually in the mid year(2010 to 2020) which were accounted for just below 1. 4 billions and more than 1. 4 billions respectively. Moreover, the growth rate of population were predict that the rate will decline steadily in the last three years which was from above 1. 4 to below 1. 4 billions.
The line graph provides information about
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population
of India and China between 2000 and 2020 whereas the figures is
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expected
to increase and reach in high level. The graph
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are
measured in numbers.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that, China experienced a down trend, while India a
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showed
an upward trend throughout the period. Although India
initially
had a lower
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rate
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but
it will be
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outrace
chine at the
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end
of the period.

To
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begin
with, the number of
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population
increased
slowly
from around one
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billions
to one and third
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billions
in the
first
three years.
Likewise
, the
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rate
of
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population
will be growing which comprised to approximately 1. 5
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billions
in 2030.
In addition
, the increasing
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will peak out at the
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end
of the period which made up around 1. 6
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billions
as shown in figures.

However
, at the beginning of the period, the
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rate
of China were
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just
below 1. 3
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and it rose
gradually
in the
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mid year
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below 1. 4
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of
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population
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were
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IELTS academic The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

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