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The pictures demonstrate how the cherry jam is made by factory. They fallow 9 step that start by shaking the trees and cook them and put jam into jars

The pictures demonstrate how the cherry jam is made by factory. They fallow 9 step that start by shaking the trees and cook them and put jam into jars Oyx8E

The pictures demonstrate how the cherry jam is made by factory. They fallow 9 step that start by shaking the trees and cook them and put jam into jars. First of all, a sheet is extended under tree and tree is shaken to fall the cherries. Then the cherries are collected and are carried to the processing manufactory by truck. after that, all leaves and stems are deleted and only cherries are remained. Next, the cherries are washed by water and the stones are taken out of the middle of the cherries. The next stage is cooked the cherries and the sugar and lemon juice also pectin are added. Subsequently, the quality of the jam is checked. Then, the jam is put into jars. Afterward, a label is stuck on the jars. As the pictures show all of production stages are done by automatically machines and humans are not done anything except in check step. Finally, you need a loaf of hot bread to eat this delicious jam.

The pictures demonstrate how the cherry jam is made
 by factory. They fallow 9 step that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 by shaking the trees and cook them and put jam into jars.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, a sheet is extended
 under tree and tree is shaken
 to fall the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
. Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are collected
 and are carried
 to the processing Possible spelling mistake found.manufacture
manufactory
 by truck. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 that, all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and stems are deleted
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are remained
. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are washed
 by water and the stones are taken
 out of the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
. The next
 stage is cooked
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
 and the sugar and lemon juice also
 pectin are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Subsequently
, the quality of the jam is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
. Then, the jam is put
 into jars. Afterward, a label is stuck
 on the jars. As the pictures This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
Consider using "all production" or "all of the production".all productionall of the production
all of production
 stages are done
 by automatically
 machines and humans are not done anything except in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 step. Finally
, you need a loaf of hot bread to eat this delicious jam. 