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The graph below the shows the average level of methen globally.

The graph below the shows the average level of methen globally. gbmGA
The line chart illustrates about the level of methane gas in atmosphere tariff, and the seasonal wheel has been removed between 2004 and 2008 Overall, the highest rate of the CH4 in 2008 due to the fact that seasonal variation was reached on pick. This different was gradually upward trend after 2005. The methane rate was supremely between 2006 and 2007. Clearly shows this graph that CH4 gas rate was reached around in 2004 on the contrary this year season difference level approximately same. After 2004, this air price was decreased in 2005, level was roughly 1775. Those time periodic change was more, it moved among 1780 to 1768. 2005 2006 and 2007 Mithane gas proportion nearly equal but more variation between these years Furthermore, CH4 ratio was gradually upward trend and also seasonal movement. This gas was 1790 in 2008, and season changes was 1790 in 2008, and season changes was the highest PPB among the chart.
The line chart illustrates about the level of methane
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gas
in atmosphere tariff, and the seasonal wheel has
been removed
between 2004 and 2008
Overall
, the highest rate of the CH4 in 2008 due to the fact that seasonal variation
was reached
on pick. This
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different
was
gradually
upward trend after 2005. The methane rate was
supremely
between 2006 and 2007.
Clearly
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shows
this graph that CH4
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gas
rate
was reached
around in 2004
on the contrary
this year season difference level approximately same. After 2004, this air price
was decreased
in 2005, level was roughly 1775. Those time periodic
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change
was more, it
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moved
among 1780 to 1768. 2005 2006 and 2007
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Mithane
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proportion
nearly
equal
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but
more variation between these years
Furthermore
, CH4 ratio was
gradually
upward trend and
also
seasonal movement. This
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gas
was 1790 in 2008, and season
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changes
was 1790 in 2008, and season
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changes
was the highest PPB among the chart.
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