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est farm land changes year to year from 1900 to 1990

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Diagram illustrate changes in land of west harm and value of land per hectare over a period from 1900 to 1990. However, west farm in 1900 having total land of 5000 hectares which cost them 1 dollar for value value per hectare. Gradually \, there are difference in 1925 in which west farm land dramitcally fall from 5000 hectares to 850 hectares which is decrease in 4. 25% due to drop of land size on other side price of land hike upto 20 dollars per hectares
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of west harm and value of
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per hectare over a period from 1900 to 1990.
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of 5000 hectares which cost them 1 dollar for
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fall from 5000 hectares to 850 hectares which is decrease in 4. 25% due to drop of
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size on other side price of
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hike
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20 dollars per hectares
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