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The pie chart shows the energy use of Australian households in 2008.

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The pie chart shows the energy use of Australian households in 2008. In general, cooling and heating of Australians are mainly reflected in the way they live and use electronic devices. At the same time, the stand-by power and cooking consumption of Australian households are negligible It can be seen that keeping the home heating and cooling consumes almost half of the energy required by ordinary Australian households, accounting for 38% of electricity. In addition, heating water also consumes a considerable amount of electricity, up to a quarter of the electricity. These two items alone account for more than half of the electricity in these households. The least power consumption is 3% of standby power and 4% of cooking power. Cooking, backup power and lighting together use approximately 14% of electricity, as opposed to refrigerators and cabinets east only needs 7% of electricity. All other devices consume only 16% of power
The pie chart
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the energy
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use
of Australian households in 2008.

In general
, cooling and heating of Australians are
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reflected in the way they
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live
and
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use
electronic devices. At the same time, the stand-by
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power
and cooking consumption of Australian households are
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negligible


It can be
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seen
that keeping the home heating and cooling consumes almost half of the energy required by ordinary Australian households, accounting for 38% of
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electricity
.
In addition
, heating water
also
consumes a considerable amount of
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electricity
, up to a quarter of the
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electricity
. These two items alone account for more than half of the
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electricity
in these households.

The least
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power
consumption is 3% of standby
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power
and 4% of cooking
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power
. Cooking, backup
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power
and lighting together
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use
approximately 14% of
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electricity
, as opposed to refrigerators and cabinets east
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only
needs 7% of
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electricity
. All other devices consume
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only
16% of
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power
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the energy use of Australian households in 2008.

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