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The pictures below shows the changes that took place at Laguna town from 1986 to present day

The pictures below shows the changes that took place at Laguna town from 1986 to present day 6ll2l

The maps provide an information on changes that happened in Laguna town since 1986 until today. It is clear that, Laguna has dramatically changed into the more residential town with some improvement in its infrastructures. By 1986, between the town main road and the river, there was a post office in the south of shops. On the southern side of the post office a few houses and farmlands was located. In the east side of the road, gardens occupied a large scape contained of three large houses, also at the back of gardens, primary school located. From this school to the bridge there were a few farmland and houses. By contrast, in present day, all the farmlands have removed which made a quite enough space to build dead ends, and many small houses have built around them. Primary school has extended to be able to response properly to residences educational needs. Today, where gardens stood, there is a retirement home big enough for new Laguna town. The post office and Laguna bridge are preserved until new.

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changed
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some
 improvement in its infrastructures.

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town
 main road and the river, there was a post office in the south of shops. On the southern side of the post office a few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and farmlands was located
. In the east side of the road, gardens occupied a large Possible spelling mistake found.scaleescapeshapescopecapescare
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