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The diagram illustrates how bricks are produced for building purposes.

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The diagram illustrates how bricks are produced for building purposes. It is crystal clear that there are seven main steps in this process, beginning with digging clay out from the ground and ending with delivering the final product to the customer. At the very first stage, raw clay is dug out from the ground by a digger and put onto a metal grid to create smaller pieces. After that, sand and water are added to create a mixture before being cut by a wire cutter as well as a mould in order to produce shaped bricks. The products from the third step are dried by a drying oven in 24-48 hours. A kiln heats the bricks at first in moderate temperature (200 degree to 980 degree Celsius). After that, those bricks are transferred into another kiln which heats them in high temperature ( 870 degree-1300 degree celsius). Then, the completed bricks are packaged before being delivered to the customer.

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bricks
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The products from the third step are dried
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