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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. 7qWX
The line graph comapres the numver of tourists visiting a caribbean island particularly visitors staying on cruise ships and on island over a period of 8 year's. It is noticeable that caribbean island was far by the most popular palce over a period of 8-year's. Mostly visitors staying on cruise ships while least visitors was choose staying on island between the periode of 2010-2017. In 2010, only 1 million people visiting a caribbean island but in 1 million people only 0. 7 million visitors staying on island. While, 0. 3 million tourists staying on cruise ship. We saw dramatic changes in number of tourists who staying on cruise ship or staying on island between a periode of 2011-2015. In 2011, total 1. 25 million number of tourists visiting a caribbean island only 0. 8 million people staying on island while visitors staying on cruise ship increased around 0. 2 millions. In the year of 2012 1. 4 million people visiting an island approximately but in 1. 4 million people only 0. 3 million visitors staying on cruise ship but most of visitors around 1. 1 million tourists staying on island. Total number of tourists increase gradually over a periode of 8 years middle the periode of 2015 to 2016 around 2. 6 million tourists visit the caribbean island middle of this periode visitors staying on cruise ships overtook the visitors staying on island. In 2017, dramatic increased in total number of visitors, reached at approximately 3. 5 million tourists. Around 2 million visitors staying on cruise ships. While, 1. 25 million people staying on island approximately.
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caribbean
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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