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The diagram illustrates the production of the leather goods through 11 steps starting from drying the material till the production of bags and shoes.

The diagram illustrates the production of the leather goods through 11 steps starting from drying the material till the production of bags and shoes. 2N6o

The diagram illustrates the production of the leather goods through 11 steps starting from drying the material till the production of bags and shoes. Firstly, the animal skin is dried under the sunshine at a particular temperature. However, after drying it, the skin is sent to the factory through lorries and trucks, and from here this material is washed using a mixture of lime and water, in order to remove the impurities. This purified material is then soaked in lime for a particular period of time, and then flattened using a machine. Moreover, this material is then soaked into tannin which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter. However, this soaked material is later sent for polishing so that the material becomes shiny and perfect for use. Furthermore, this polished material is transported to the leather factory by trucks and lorries. Finally, this leather from the factory manufactures shoes, bags, footwear as well as sports materials.

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goods
 through 11 steps starting from drying the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 till the production of bags and shoes.

Firstly
, the animal skin is dried
 under the sunshine at a particular temperature. However
, after drying it, the skin is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the factory through lorries and trucks, and from here this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
is washed
 using a mixture of lime and water, in order to remove the impurities. This purified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 is then soaked in lime for a particular period of time, and then flattened using a machine. Moreover
, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 is then soaked into tannin which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter.

However
, this soaked You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 is later This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 for polishing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 becomes shiny and perfect for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. Furthermore
, this polished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
is transported
 to the leather factory by trucks and lorries. Finally
, this leather from the factory manufactures shoes, bags, footwear as well
 as sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
. 