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The picture shows the life cycle of bee.

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The provided diagram depicts the information regarding the life cycle of a honey bee Overall, it is crystal clear from the diagram that it involves 6 distinct stages starting with laying eggs. The whole cycle take more than a month to complete Is is clear that in the initial stage the eggs are laid by female honey bee twice in a week. Following this, within 9 to 10 days each egg hatches and an infant honey bee appears from egg. in the third stage, the nymph grows in size and sheds it's skin thrice. the process is known as moulting. As moulting first take place within 5 days after hatching eggs then next moulting is within 7 days and another take place more than a week Delving further, after third moulting the young adult emerge and after passing the period of four days, the bee reaches full maturity and the cycle continues
The provided diagram depicts the information regarding the life cycle of a honey bee

Overall
, it is crystal
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from the diagram that it involves 6 distinct stages starting with laying eggs. The whole cycle take more than a month to complete

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Is is
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that in the initial stage the eggs
are laid
by female honey bee twice in a week. Following this, within 9 to 10 days each egg hatches and an infant honey bee appears from egg.
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in
the third stage, the nymph grows in size and sheds
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it's
skin thrice.
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the
process
is known
as
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moulting
. As
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moulting
first
take place within 5 days after hatching eggs then
next
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moulting
is within 7 days and another take place more than a
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week


Delving
further
, after third
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moulting
the young adult emerge and after passing the period of four days, the bee reaches full maturity and the cycle continues

IELTS academic The picture shows the life cycle of bee.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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