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past and after reconstruction of island

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The two maps represent the island in the past and the island after the reconstruction including tourist facilities. Overall, it is clearly notice that before the construction of the island there was a sea on two opposite sides. While, after the renovation, there was only North-West side with the sea. The island after construction had increased accommodation facility. Firstly, prior to construction, there was tress on the East and West sides. However, it got replaced with accommodation and few trees on Westside after construction. Before there was a sea in North-West and South-East direction which changed to the pier on South-East after renovation. Moreover, the beach remained in the same direction and after construction, there was swimming on top of a beach. It was surrounded by a footpath. The whole area was covered in 100 meters. After the redesigning, reception centre was constructed and restaurant was above to it which were supported by vehicle track. Furthermore, on both sides (East and West) had the highest houses and there was a footpath across the accommodation.

The two maps represent the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 in the past and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 after the reconstruction including tourist facilities.

Overall
, it is clearly
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notice
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 there was a sea on two opposite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
. While, after the renovation, there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 North-West side with the sea. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
 had increased accommodation facility.

Firstly
, prior to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
, there was tress on the East and West You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
. However
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 replaced with accommodation and few trees on Westside after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 there was a sea in North-West and South-East direction which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to the pier on South-East after renovation. Moreover
, the beach remained in the same direction and after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
, there was swimming on top of a beach. It was surrounded
 by a footpath. The whole area was covered
 in 100 meters.

After the redesigning, reception Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
was constructed
 and restaurant was above to it which were supported
 by vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
. Furthermore
, on both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
 (East and West) had the highest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and there was a footpath across the accommodation. 