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The picture show the changes that took place at laguna beach from 1950 to 1990

The picture show the changes that took place at laguna beach from 1950 to 1990 2r906
The diagram illustrates how laguna beach has developed over three different time periods (1950, 1970, and 1990). Overall, laguna beach increased in size and track recreational and became a proper road. Furthermore, the beach area diminished at the end of the given timeline. Meanwhile, the gardening beach became a modernized beach. In 1950, beach huts had at the middle of a laguna beach where track connected from the northwest. Hence, the laguna had woodland across the track. whereas, sand dunes were located in the Northeast. In 1970, some portions of the laguna beach were developed namely, beach huts transform into villas and the track became a road. While woodland recreated and became a caravan park. In 1990, laguna beach became a modernized beach. For Instance, villas were recreated and converted into a hotel. Moreover, a pool was added on the left side of the road and behind the hotel. Additionally, sand dunes converted into landscaped gardens beside the hotel. the surf schools were added near the beach or on the southwest.
The diagram illustrates how laguna
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has developed over three
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different
time periods (1950, 1970, and 1990).

Overall
, laguna
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beach
increased in size and
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track
recreational and
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became
a proper road.
Furthermore
, the
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beach
area diminished at the
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end
of the
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given
timeline. Meanwhile, the gardening
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beach
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became
a modernized beach.

In 1950,
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huts had at the middle of a laguna
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beach
where
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track
connected from the northwest.
Hence
, the
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laguna
had woodland across the
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track
.
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whereas
, sand dunes
were located
in the Northeast. In 1970,

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some
portions of the laguna
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beach
were developed
namely
,
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beach
huts transform into villas and the
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track
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became
a road. While woodland recreated and
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became
a caravan park.

In 1990, laguna
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beach
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became
a modernized
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beach
.
For Instance
, villas
were recreated
and converted into a hotel.
Moreover
, a pool was
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added
on the
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left
side of the road and behind the hotel.
Additionally
, sand dunes converted into landscaped gardens beside the hotel.
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the
surf schools were
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added
near the
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beach
or on the southwest.
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IELTS academic The picture show the changes that took place at laguna beach from 1950 to 1990

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