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The picture provides how to collect information weather by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. It can be seen that, ther are four primary stages involved in this process, starting with the collection of weather condition. After that this information is analysised, classified for presentation. Eventually get ready for broadcasting to the public. According to the first two steps of this process, there are three ways of gathering weather data: through satellite radar and drifting buoy at the sea, incoming information will be received by this equipment to analysis. Next, received information is passed radar station and satellite photos. Especially, synoptic chart also received data which can be transmitted to the public on computer with the same equipment. Turning to the final stages, weather broadcast well-prepared on computer. In which put on the air to the public on television, record by telephone and radio.
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by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. It can be
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ther are
four primary stages involved in this process, starting with the collection of
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weather
condition. After that this
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information
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analysised
, classified for presentation.
Eventually
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get
ready for broadcasting to the public. According to the
first
two steps of this process, there are three ways of gathering
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weather
data: through satellite radar and drifting buoy at the sea, incoming
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information
will
be received
by this equipment to analysis.
Next
, received
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information
is passed
radar station and satellite photos.
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, synoptic chart
also
received data which can
be transmitted
to the public on computer with the same equipment. Turning to the final stages,
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weather
broadcast well-prepared on computer. In which put on the air to the public on television, record by telephone and radio.
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IELTS academic The picture provides how to collect information weather by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.

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143 words
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