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The picture illustrates the changes of the small city of Weymouth in the year of 1995 to present tense

The picture illustrates the changes of the small city of Weymouth in the year of 1995 to present tense A3Y7L
of the small city of Weymouth in the year of 1995 to present tenseOverall, we can see that there is so many changes happen. However, the farmland and forest park has been removed and many new facilities like golf, tennis and restaurants built in small town of ryemouth. It is clearly visible from the map that in 1995 their are less houses in west but at this the houses are more added. However, there was a farmland and forest park that had been removed and now there is newly built golf and tennis ground. Moreover, the small town of ryemouth having special advantage of car parking beside the hotel instead their was hotel only in 1995. On the other, hand their shop across the road which has been changed to restuarant in present time and also for small city having now new facilities of apartments instead of fish market at the sea side but in that time there was a fishing port had been destroyed by the present time. Furthermore the cafe remain unchanged over the time
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city of Weymouth in the year of 1995 to present
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, the farmland and forest park has
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new facilities like golf, tennis and restaurants built in
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town of
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ryemouth
. It is
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visible from the map that in 1995
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are
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less
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in west
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at this the
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are more
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, there was a farmland and forest park that had
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now
there is
newly
built golf and tennis ground.
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, the
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town of
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ryemouth
having special advantage of car parking beside the hotel
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was hotel
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in 1995. On the other, hand their shop across the road which has been
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restuarant
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new facilities of apartments
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in that
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there was a fishing port had been
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IELTS academic The picture illustrates the changes of the small city of Weymouth in the year of 1995 to present tense

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