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ThE map below a civic center between its present and future plans

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The given maps illustrate the current layout and future changes in city center. Overall, it is noticeable that, only cinema and shopping center hasn't changed, while the other areas will be removed to another places. There is a cinema which is situated in the middle of two car parks in North Avenue and these car parks will be reconstructed into underground parking near Town Hall in South. There will be built a restaurant, hotel, cafe in both corner of North avenue, which let people to visit the amenities in one side of the street. Moreover, exhibition, located next to Hight Street in present plan will be replaced to another side of Smith street in future. Finally, the library and underground will be occurred in West immediatly to the right side of council office that has been planed in this place
The
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given
maps illustrate the
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current
layout and future
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changes
in city center.

Overall
, it is noticeable that,
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only
cinema and shopping center hasn't
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changed
, while the other areas will
be removed
to another places.

There is a cinema which
is situated
in the middle of two car parks in North Avenue and these car parks will
be reconstructed
into underground parking near Town Hall in South. There will
be built
a restaurant, hotel,
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cafe
in both corner of North avenue, which
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let
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people
to visit the amenities in one side of the street.

Moreover
, exhibition, located
next
to
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Hight
Street in present plan will
be replaced
to another side of Smith street
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.
Finally
, the library and underground will
be occurred
in West
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immediatly
to the right side of council office that has
been planed
in this place
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IELTS academic ThE map below a civic center between its present and future plans

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  American English
4 paragraphs
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