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The maps show the floor plan of a home

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The maps illustrate present floor of a home and future plan to change. Overall, the most important changes that can be seen are building extra study/bedrooms, as well as the creation of an ensuite bathroom. Now there is a garden opposite the hall, but it is predicted that its location will be replaced with parking. Also the living room will be converted into study/bedroom which will be situated between two other study/bedrooms. Furthermore, there are plans to build extra study/bedroom above the entrance and ensuite bathroom beyond parking. The hall is going to be expanded, while the kitchen is projected to be extended. The study/bedroom which is located in the corner is planning to be shortened in size. However, the garden on the top and study/bedroom in the corner below the kitchen will remain stable.
The maps illustrate present floor of a home and future plan to
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important
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are building extra
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study/bedrooms
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as well
as the creation of an
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ensuite
bathroom.

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Now
there is a garden opposite the hall,
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it
is predicted
that its location will
be replaced
with parking.
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Also
the living room will
be converted
into
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study/bedroom
which will
be situated
between two other
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study/bedrooms
.
Furthermore
, there are plans to build extra
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study/bedroom
above the entrance and
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ensuite
bathroom beyond parking.

The hall is going to
be expanded
, while the kitchen
is projected
to
be extended
. The
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study/bedroom
which
is located
in the corner is planning to
be shortened
in size.
However
, the garden on the top and
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study/bedroom
in the corner below the kitchen will remain stable.
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IELTS academic The maps show the floor plan of a home

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4 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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