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The chart provides information about the migration of people from rural to the city centers in Iran, Russia, Indonesia and predictions for next years. Population of countries are measured in millions. Overall, it can clearly be seen that the nation of Iran and Russia will show an upward trend, compared to Indonesia, which will show a downward trend throughout the period. There were fluctuations in all countries. Furthermore, the figure of Iran initially was on deep at the beginning, but it would outrace Russia and Indonesia in 2025. In detail, the amount of people in all countries was under 20 million in 2000. In 2005 the figure of Russia rose sharply and would hit of about 88 million in the final year. Likewise, the amount of Iran people remain stable with 5-year integral in 2000 and 2005. Form this period, the line of Iran increase steeply and will reach a peak of above 90 million in the last period. There will be slight difference approximately 10 million in the number of people Russia and Iran in 2025. In terms of Indonesia, the number of people will be on top in 2020 (about 30 million), after it will steadily drop to 20 million in 2025.
The chart provides information about the migration of
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people
from rural to the city centers in Iran, Russia, Indonesia and predictions for
next
years. Population of countries
are measured
in millions.

Overall
, it can
clearly
be
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seen
that the nation of Iran and Russia will
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show
an upward trend, compared to Indonesia, which will
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show
a downward trend throughout the period. There were fluctuations in all countries.
Furthermore
, the figure of Iran
initially
was on deep at the beginning,
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it would outrace Russia and Indonesia in 2025.

In detail, the amount of
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people
in all countries was under 20
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million
in 2000. In 2005 the figure of Russia rose
sharply
and would hit of about 88
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million
in the final year.
Likewise
, the amount of Iran
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people
remain stable with 5-year integral in 2000 and 2005. Form this period, the line of Iran increase
steeply
and will reach a peak of above 90
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million
in the last period. There will be slight difference approximately 10
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million
in the number of
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people
Russia and Iran in 2025.

In terms of Indonesia, the number of
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will be on top in 2020 (about 30
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, after it will
steadily
drop to 20
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in 2025.
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