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The picture illustrates how instant noodle is manufactured in the factory.

The picture illustrates how instant noodle is manufactured in the factory. 2pkM
The picture illustrates how instant noodle is manufactured in the factory. Generally, in the first instance, the flour as the raw material of instant noodles is stored in the storage silos. After several processes, the packed instant noodles are ready to distribute. The manufacturing of instant noodles started by mixing the flour from storage silos, all together with water and oil and become a dough. Hereinafter, the rollers laminate the dough and produce dough sheets in the desire thickness. Following this, it passes strips machine as well as discs machine. Hence, noodles discs are established. In the sequel, the noodles disc are deep fried in the particular time using cooking oil for its durability. The fried noodles then dried before it filled in the cups, and the vegetables, likewise the spices are added concurrently. Eventually, the cup noodles are labeled and sealed before ready to sell and distribute in the market.
The picture illustrates how instant
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noodle
is manufactured
in the factory.

Generally
, in the
first
instance, the flour as the raw material of instant
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noodles
is stored
in the storage silos. After several processes, the packed instant
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noodles
are ready to distribute.

The manufacturing of instant
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noodles
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started
by mixing the flour from storage silos, all together with water and oil and become a dough. Hereinafter, the rollers laminate the dough and produce dough sheets in the desire thickness. Following this, it passes strips machine
as well
as discs machine.
Hence
,
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noodles
discs
are established
.

In the sequel, the
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noodles
disc are
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deep fried
in the particular time using cooking oil for its durability. The fried
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noodles
then dried
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before
it filled in the cups, and the vegetables,
likewise
the spices are
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added
concurrently
.
Eventually
, the cup
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noodles
are labeled
and sealed
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before
ready to sell and distribute in the market.
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IELTS academic The picture illustrates how instant noodle is manufactured in the factory.

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151 words
6.5
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