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The picture below shows the process of making electricity from coal.

The picture below shows the process of making electricity from coal. 1opJ7
The diagram depicts the information about the how electricity is generating. The initial begin with mine to final step, supply to houses and industries. After analyzing, clearly seen that in first step, mining for coal to produce the electricity, in second step, coal are being crushed into powder form after that these powder transfer to factory with the help of two wheel trolley and trucks for further stage. The diagram further collates that in the subsequent step, in the gassifier solid waste are being eliminated and gas transfer to next step. In the second last step, gas are store in gas power plant. Finally, heat waste are let out and make electricity for supply to houses and industries. Overall, there are 8 steps in the process and all stages in this method are equally imperative. Omission of one single step halt the whole process.
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electricity is generating. The initial
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with mine to final
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, supply to
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houses
and industries.

After analyzing,
clearly
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that in
first
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step
, mining for coal to produce the electricity, in second
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step
, coal are
being crushed
into powder form after that these powder transfer to factory with the
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help
of two wheel trolley and trucks for
further
stage.

The diagram
further
collates that in the subsequent
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step
, in the
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gassifier
solid waste are
being eliminated
and gas transfer to
next
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step
. In the second last
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step
, gas are store in gas power plant.
Finally
, heat waste are
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let
out and
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make
electricity for supply to
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houses
and industries.

Overall
, there are 8
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steps
in the process and all stages in this method are
equally
imperative. Omission of one single
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step
halt the whole process.
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IELTS academic The picture below shows the process of making electricity from coal.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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