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The picture below shows the life cycle of the salmon. 1MmA
The diagram illustrates the life circle of the salmon. The salmon lays its eggs in upper river where the water slowly moves. All of the eggs will be cover by reeds and small stones for five to six months. After which the eggs hatch into “fry”, which are three to eight centimeters lengths. These “fry” lives in lower fast flowing river for next four years. In the next stage of life cycle, the “fry” grow bigger, and called smolt. Their size is big almost twice as much as fry, which are twelve to fifteen centimeters lengths. Then they keep moving further down river into the open sea to live next five years. Eventually, the salmon attains its full size of seventy to seventy six centimeters in the ocean. After stay there for five years, the salmon swims back to its birthplace to lay their eggs and die. And the life cycle starts again. The diagram illustrates the life circle of the salmon. The salmon lays its eggs in upper river where the water slowly moves. All of the eggs will be cover by reeds and small stones for five to six months. After which the eggs hatch into “fry”, which are three to eight centimeters lengths. These “fry” lives in lower fast flowing river for next four years. In the next stage of life cycle, the “fry” grow bigger, and called smolt. Their size is big almost twice as much as fry, which are twelve to fifteen centimeters lengths. Then they keep moving further down river into the open sea to live next five years. Eventually, the salmon attains its full size of seventy to seventy six centimeters in the ocean. After stay there for five years, the salmon swims back to its birthplace to lay their eggs and die. And the life cycle starts again. The diagram illustrates the life circle of the salmon. The salmon lays its eggs in upper river where the water slowly moves. All of the eggs will be cover by reeds and small stones for five to six months. After which the eggs hatch into “fry”, which are three to eight centimeters lengths. These “fry” lives in lower fast flowing river for next four years. In the next stage of life cycle, the “fry” grow bigger, and called smolt. Their size is big almost twice as much as fry, which are twelve to fifteen centimeters lengths. Then they keep moving further down river into the open sea to live next five years. Eventually, the salmon attains its full size of seventy to seventy six centimeters in the ocean. After stay there for five years, the salmon swims back to its birthplace to lay their eggs and die. And the life cycle starts again.
The diagram illustrates the
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life
circle of the salmon. The salmon
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lays
its eggs in upper
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river
where the water
slowly
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moves
.
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All of the
eggs will be cover by reeds and
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small
stones for five to six months. After which the eggs hatch into “fry”, which are three to eight centimeters
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lengths
. These “fry”
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lives
in lower
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fast
flowing
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river
for
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next
four years. In the
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next
stage of
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life
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cycle
, the “fry” grow bigger, and called
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smolt
. Their
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size
is
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big
almost twice as much as fry, which are twelve to fifteen centimeters
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lengths
. Then they
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keep
moving
further
down
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river
into the open sea to
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live
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next
five years.
Eventually
, the salmon attains its full
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size
of seventy to
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seventy six
centimeters in the ocean. After stay there for five years, the salmon swims back to its birthplace to
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lay
their eggs and
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die
. And the
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life
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cycle
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starts
again. The diagram illustrates the
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life
circle of the salmon. The salmon
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lays
its eggs in upper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
river
where the water
slowly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moves
.
Consider using "all the".
All of the
eggs will be cover by reeds and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
stones for five to six months. After which the eggs hatch into “fry”, which are three to eight centimeters
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lengths
. These “fry”
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lives
in lower
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fast
flowing
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river
for
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next
four years. In the
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next
stage of
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life
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cycle
, the “fry” grow bigger, and called
Possible spelling mistake found.
smolt
. Their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
size
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
almost twice as much as fry, which are twelve to fifteen centimeters
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lengths
. Then they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
moving
further
down
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
river
into the open sea to
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live
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next
five years.
Eventually
, the salmon attains its full
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size
of seventy to
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
seventy six
centimeters in the ocean. After stay there for five years, the salmon swims back to its birthplace to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lay
their eggs and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
die
. And the
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life
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cycle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
again. The diagram illustrates the
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life
circle of the salmon. The salmon
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lays
its eggs in upper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
river
where the water
slowly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moves
.
Consider using "all the".
All of the
eggs will be cover by reeds and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
stones for five to six months. After which the eggs hatch into “fry”, which are three to eight centimeters
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lengths
. These “fry”
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lives
in lower
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
flowing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
river
for
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next
four years. In the
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next
stage of
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life
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cycle
, the “fry” grow bigger, and called
Possible spelling mistake found.
smolt
. Their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
size
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
almost twice as much as fry, which are twelve to fifteen centimeters
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lengths
. Then they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
moving
further
down
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
river
into the open sea to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
next
five years.
Eventually
, the salmon attains its full
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
size
of seventy to
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
seventy six
centimeters in the ocean. After stay there for five years, the salmon swims back to its birthplace to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lay
their eggs and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
die
. And the
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life
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cycle
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starts
again.
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