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The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarize the information

The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. QXmb

The line graph illustrates the proportion of early-year teachers with regular teaching jobs over six-years, from 2001 to 2007 in Ontario. The figure is divided into two types of graduation teachers who teach English and French language. Overall, both English and French-language teachers had a similar percentage at the beginning of the period. While regular job rates of early-year English language program graduates fell significantly, in contrast, French- language teachers rates rose at the end of the period and reached the peak. In 2001, the percentage of French language teachers was approximately 70%. In comparison, the trend for English language teachers was slightly higher than French with almost 73%. The next year witnessed a downward trend in the recruitment rates of both language teachers (58% and 52% respectively). In terms of 2003, the figure for French-language teachers slightly increased and then remained stable at around 70% for three years (2003-2006), before reaching a peak at 75% in last year. Meanwhile, the English teachers proportion rose gradually in 2005 but then rapidly decreased and fell to 30% in 2007.

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