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The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst Boy's and Girl's. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst Boy's and Girl's. DJXo
The pie chart depicts the various cultural and leisure activity perform by boys and girls. Overall, it can be observed that activities like Reading, Computer games and Listening to the music are done by both boys and girls. Other activities like skateboarding, basketball, soccer, netball, dancing and gymnastics are performed by boys and girls respectively. It clearly shows that girls mostly like reading in percentage it is 21% while boys are not like that much only 2% of them do reading. Next is computer games which played by 16% of girls and 34% of boys. Activity of listening to music in which both boys and girls spend same time which is 10%. Moreover, boys do other leisure activities like skateboarding which 11%. Basketball is second most played game by them which is 26% of overall activities. 17% of time they play soccer. Lastly it depicts that 15% of girls plays netball. Dancing have highest percentage 27% which is done by them. They spent 11% of time in gymnastics.
The pie chart depicts the various cultural and leisure
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activities
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are done
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. Other
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activities
like skateboarding, basketball, soccer, netball, dancing and gymnastics
are performed
by
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and
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girls
respectively
. It
clearly
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shows
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girls
mostly
like reading in percentage it is 21% while
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boys
are not like that much
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2% of them
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do reading
.
Next
is computer games which played by 16% of
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girls
and 34% of
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boys
.
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Activity
of listening to music in which both
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and
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spend same time which is 10%.
Moreover
,
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boys
do other leisure
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activities
like skateboarding which 11%. Basketball is second most played game by them which is 26% of
overall
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activities
. 17% of time they play soccer.
Lastly
it depicts that 15% of
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girls
plays netball. Dancing have
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highest
percentage 27% which
is done
by them. They spent 11% of time in gymnastics.
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