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The picture below show the information of the proposed plans of training center.

The picture below show the information of the proposed plans of training center. aW2w
The set of pictures illustrate information regarding the anticipation of the plans for training centre. It is evident from the detail that for plan A and B candidates should come into the centre from the North side because there will be only one entrance available. Besides this for plan A white board situated just near to the entry gate and towards the west there might be a president's chair along with a table. Then, in the east and west direction two tables will be establish with three chairs in each direction; in the southern part of the centre a cafeteria would build where participants would have morning tea also o in this place there might be a large table with 4 chairs. Analysing the data of the plan B it can be highlighted that there should be two tables for morning tea in the Northwest corners in this plan. Apart form this, presidents chair and table might be located next to the white board And in south, west and east direction 3 tables with chairs may be located. Overall it can be inferred that although plants equal similarities, a plan a is more spacious as compared to the plan B.
The set of pictures
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information regarding the anticipation of the
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plans
for training
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centre
.

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plan
A and B candidates should
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come
into the
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centre
from the North side
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because
there will be
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only
one entrance available.
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this for
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plan
A white board situated
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just
near to the entry gate and towards the west there might be a president's
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chair
along with a
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table
. Then, in the east and west direction two
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tables
will be
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establish
with three
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chairs
in each direction; in the southern part of the
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centre
a cafeteria would build where participants would have morning tea
also
o in this place there might be a large
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table
with 4
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chairs
.
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Analysing
the data of the
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plan
B it can
be highlighted
that there should be two
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tables
for morning tea in the Northwest corners in this
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plan
.
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this, presidents
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chair
and
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table
might
be located
next
to the white board And in south, west and east direction 3
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tables
with
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may
be located
.
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it can
be inferred
that although plants equal similarities, a
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plan
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a
is more spacious as compared to the
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plan
B.
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IELTS academic The picture below show the information of the proposed plans of training center.

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200 words
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