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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. d0J6
The given below two charts represents the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart illustrates the reasons why older people decided to study. The below pie chart depicts how individuals think the cost of each course should be divided. Overall, the majority of the adults are interested in their subjects and gain qualifications. The lowest proportion of adult’s desire to change their jobs and meet new people. And in the pie chart, most people think that an important part of expenditure on education should be borne by an individual and the employer. On the one hand, people interested in their subjects are around 40% whereas to gain qualification are 32%. Individuals desire that it will helpful for their current job, improve their prospects of promotion and also enjoy learning are accounted for 22%, 20% and 20% respectively. On the other hand, they can be able to change their jobs at 12% and to meet new people are nearly 9%. In a pictorial split, the major part of spending on each course should be shared by an individual and the employer about 75% (40% for individual and 35% for employer) and the minor part will be shared by taxpayer almost 25%.
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illustrates the reasons why older
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, most
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interested in their subjects are around 40% whereas to gain qualification are 32%.
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desire that it will helpful for their
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their jobs at 12% and to
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individual
and the employer about 75% (40% for
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and 35% for employer) and the minor part will
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by taxpayer almost 25%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

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