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The pictorial illustration compares the map of the recreation center in 2008 and 2012.

The pictorial illustration compares the map of the recreation center in 2008 and 2012. YgN6N
The pictorial illustration compares the map of the recreation center in 2008 and 2012. Overall, the Amphitheater changed drastically in the next renovation, while other areas remained the same. The entry for Recreation Center was in the west direction, with Yoga Hall just above them. To the left of the entry, there was a massive rectangular area dedicated to Badminton Court. Meanwhile, below the Yoga hall, one can notice a huge Swimming pool. Whereas, the exit for this was parallel to the arrival and they both were attached. In 2008, the rest of the territory was occupied by Amphitheater, which had an oval-shaped arena as the stage for performance. And, the seats for the audience were in the north-eastern part of the Center, facing in a southwest way. However, in the next refurbishment, it was replaced by Table Tennis Court and Gymnasium and Spa. The earlier one was located to the exact opposite of the Court. And, topmost right corner situated the latter part, remaining places were untouched.
The pictorial illustration compares the map of the recreation center in 2008 and 2012.
Overall
, the Amphitheater
changed
drastically
in the
next
renovation, while other areas remained the same.

The entry for Recreation Center was in the west direction, with Yoga Hall
just
above them. To the
left
of the entry, there was a massive rectangular area dedicated to Badminton Court. Meanwhile, below the Yoga hall, one can notice a huge Swimming pool. Whereas, the exit for this was parallel to the
arrival and
they both
were attached
.

In 2008, the rest of the territory
was occupied
by Amphitheater, which had an oval-shaped arena as the stage for performance. And, the seats for the audience were in the north-eastern part of the Center, facing
in a southwest way
.
However
, in the
next
refurbishment, it
was replaced
by Table Tennis Court and Gymnasium and Spa. The earlier one
was located
to the exact opposite of the Court. And, topmost right corner situated the latter part, remaining places
were untouched
.
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