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The graph illustrates Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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The graph illustrates Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Overall, the number of passengers is unbalanced from morning till evening. It can be well observed that the highest London underground station passengers are at 08: 00 while the lowest station passengers are at 06: 00 and 16: 00. Although after 08: 00 the number of passengers is decreasing dramatically. On the one hand, the number of passengers is increasing from 06: 00 till 08: 00 and reached the apex. Although after 08: 00 it decreases rapidly till the 10: 00. Furthermore, during the 10: 00 – 15: 00 the number of passengers is between 200-300 which shows the stability of the passengers in that period. On the other hand, the graph still kept decreasing and reached the lowest number of passengers (one hundred) which shows the same result with 06: 00. Moreover, following 16: 00 the graph started to increase and extended three hundred and nearly three quarters. As a result, the graph gradually decreased in addition to have one hundred and just over a half passenger
The
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illustrates Underground Station
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passenger
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numbers
in London.

Overall
, the
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number
of
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passengers
is unbalanced
from morning till evening. It can be well observed that the highest London underground station
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passengers
are at 08: 00 while the lowest station
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passengers
are at 06: 00 and 16: 00. Although after 08: 00 the
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number
of
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passengers
is decreasing
dramatically
.

On the one hand, the
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number
of
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passengers
is increasing from 06: 00 till 08: 00 and reached the apex. Although after 08: 00 it decreases
rapidly
till the 10: 00.
Furthermore
, during the 10: 00 – 15: 00 the
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number
of
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passengers
is between 200-300 which
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shows
the stability of the
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passengers
in that period.

On the other hand
, the
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graph
still
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kept
decreasing and reached the lowest
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number
of
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passengers
(one hundred) which
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shows
the same result with 06: 00.
Moreover
, following 16: 00 the
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started
to increase and extended three hundred and
nearly
three quarters.
As a result
, the
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gradually
decreased
in addition
to have one hundred and
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just
over a half
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passenger
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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