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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reverent.

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A glance at the diagram provided highlight how a hydroelectric power station produced electricity. From an overall perspective, the whole procedure is divided into several stages, initiating with river loading to the high-level reservoir, and power station spearing power to national grid in the end. Besides, the working patterns are according to daytime and nighttime. First, river arrives to high-level reservoir and stored by dam. Subsequently, water passes the intake and generator, in the day time. At the next stage, used water is locked at low-level reservoir, and power plant spearing electric current to national grid through the power lines during the day. At night, turbines pump water from low-level reservoir to the high-level one through the same channel. In addition, the intake is closed for locking water at night. To sum up, the processes for water staying in hydroelectric power station to producing electric current are quite different between day and night.
A glance at the diagram provided highlight how a hydroelectric
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power
station produced electricity.

From an
overall
perspective, the whole procedure
is divided
into several stages, initiating with river loading to the high-level
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reservoir
, and
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power
station spearing
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power
to national grid in the
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end
.
Besides
, the working patterns are according to daytime and nighttime.

First
, river arrives to high-level
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reservoir
and stored by dam.
Subsequently
,
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water
passes the intake and generator, in the day time. At the
next
stage,
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used
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water
is locked
at low-level
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reservoir
, and
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power
plant spearing electric
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current
to national grid through the
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power
lines during the day.

At night, turbines pump
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water
from low-level
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reservoir
to the high-level one through the same channel.
In addition
, the intake
is closed
for locking
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water
at night.

To sum up, the processes for
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water
staying in hydroelectric
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power
station to producing electric
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current
are quite
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different
between day and night.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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