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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. yXRKV
The line graph demonstrates the daily activity of passengers in Underground Station passenger numbers in London. The activity of Underground station is starting from 6. 00 am to 22. 00 pm Overall, the number of passengers is unstable starting from the morning at 6. 00 am till the end of the day. It can be well-observed, that the highest number of passengers in the station are at 8. 00 am; however, in the morning people leaving their home and going to work at that time the numbers of the passenger are increasing rapidly after 6. 00 am. To begin with, starting from the morning at 6. 00 am the number of passengers is almost quarter (100 passengers). Furthermore, the stable number of passengers begin at 12. 00-14. 00pm they are just over a half (250-300 passengers), although after 14. 00 pm the quantity of passengers decreasing rapidly to the same position how as in the morning at 6. 00 am. On the other hand, the pick number of passengers in the Underground station is only at 8. 00 am and 18. 00 pm, they are both well over three quarters at 8. 00 am (400 passengers) and at 18. 00 pm (over 350 passengers).
The line graph demonstrates the daily activity of
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passengers
in Underground
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Station
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passenger
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numbers
in London. The activity of Underground
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station
is starting from 6. 00 am to 22. 00 pm

Overall
, the
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number
of
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passengers
is unstable starting from the
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morning
at 6. 00 am till the
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end
of the day. It can be well-observed, that the highest
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number
of
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passengers
in the
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station
are at 8. 00 am;
however
, in the
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morning
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people
leaving their home and going to work at that time the
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numbers
of the
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passenger
are increasing
rapidly
after 6. 00 am.

To
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begin
with, starting from the
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morning
at 6. 00 am the
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number
of
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passengers
is almost quarter (100
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passengers)
.
Furthermore
, the stable
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number
of
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passengers
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begin
at 12. 00-14. 00pm they are
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just
over a half (250-300
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passengers)
, although after 14. 00 pm the quantity of
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passengers
decreasing
rapidly
to the same position how as in the
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morning
at 6. 00 am.

On the other hand
, the pick
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number
of
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passengers
in the Underground
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station
is
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only
at 8. 00 am and 18. 00 pm, they are both well over three quarters at 8.
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00
am (400
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passengers)
and at 18.
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00
pm (over 350
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passengers)
.
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IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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