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the percentage of male and female in 6 different types of educational

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the bar chart compares figures for two genders teacher in six basic sorts of educational setting in the uk in 2010. It is cleared that the propotion of female teacher was higher than male teacher in oer six different types of educational, with a noticeable larger percentage in nursery or pre-school. the data of women teacher tended to be decreased fro nursery to university during the number of men teachers was sightly increased. In nursery, the data reached a peak at approximately 100% in women teacher, but the men teacher just registered 2 %. In primary school, the female teacher was slightly dropped just about more than 90%, while there was a slight jumped in the data of men teacher approximately 10%. In secondary school, there was a significant declined of the women 52%, however, the men was deeply increased of 42%. In the college, it was registered a propotion of equality, both of the data was 50%. In private training institute, there was a changed, the men was higher than the women about 4%. In the university, the number of men teacher sharply jumped of 70% while the women declined of 30%. on generall, there was a changed in six different sorts of educational in the UK in 2010.
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in six basic sorts of educational setting in the
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in 2010. It
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propotion
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was higher than male
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tended to
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men
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was
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increased. In nursery, the
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reached a peak at approximately 100% in
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women
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,
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registered 2 %. In primary school, the female
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was
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about more than 90%, while there was a slight jumped in the
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approximately 10%.
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secondary school, there was a significant declined of the
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was 50%.
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private training institute, there was a
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was higher than the
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about 4%.
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the university, the number of
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sharply
jumped of 70% while the
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declined of 30%.
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IELTS academic the percentage of male and female in 6 different types of educational

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