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the participation of industry sectors to Turkish economy for the period between 2000 and 2016

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The given two pie charts illustrates the participation of industry sectors to Turkish economy for the period between 2000 and 2016. overall, the first period pie chart clearly shows that the agriculture sector predominantly attributed to the majority of Turkish economy by approximately one quarter percent meanwhile the construction sector hit the lowest contribution percent in the turkish economy. However, in the second period, the provided pie chart figure out how sectors rearranged as the lion part was for the health and education sector where contribution was around one third percent, whereas finance, business and others hit the lowest contribution percentile in the Turkish economy. it is worth to mention that heath care and education remained constant and steady over the to given periods, while the agriculture sector obviously dropped to much lower contribution percentile. In 2000 period, the pie chart clearly shows the agriculture sector's huge contribution for Turkish economy where it represent 24%, after that, healthcare, education, leisure and hospitality fields come with 17 out of a hundred percent contribution which where the second rank in that given period. others sector played a lesser role in economy in that time, for instance, trade, utilities and transportation made 14% and government played a less obvious role as 12% and lastly the 8% was achieved by the manufacturing sector. in 2015, the pig picture totally differ, as it is clearly illustrated the health care and education sector remained steady in its contribution effort, in opposite to that, the agriculture which is dramatically dropped from 24% to be 14%. on the other hand, the trad sector surge obviously from 14% to be 16% in that period.
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to Turkish
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between 2000 and 2016.

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clearly
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agriculture
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by approximately one quarter
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In 2000
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24%, after that, healthcare,
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, leisure and hospitality fields
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others
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played a lesser role in
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in its
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