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advantages and disadvantages of having only English language

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There is no doubt that the improvement in tourism has helped English becoming the most popular language in the world. Some people reckon that this would make English is the only language spoken in the world. In this essay, i will discuss some benefits and drawbacks of having only one language. Firstly, one advantage of having only one language is that it can simplify and make communication and transferring of knowledge easier. That is because people would not need to translate books and research papers, and they would be able to contact each other without a person in between. For example, an English researcher would not need to learn Chinese in order to get a piece of information from a scientist from there. Moreover, having a solo language would be reflected on the financial of the universe. As it would make the trading easier than before, and as a consequence, it will open new vacancies of work for youth. On the other hand, it will kill the diversity and the uniqueness of each country. The reason for that is the whole culture might be similar, which would be reflected on the behavior and culture of people. As a result, the movement from one country to another to see the other’s culture would probably be decreased, especially for those countries, which depend on tourism as a major source of income. If there is no variety in language and cultures, the world will suffer a lot in many aspects such as economy and difference. In conclusion, although having one language that is spoken by the whole world has many positives, there are a lot of negatives that should be taken into account.
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only
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, one advantage of
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only
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is that it can simplify and
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make
communication and transferring of knowledge easier.
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because
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people
would not need to translate books and research papers, and they would be able to contact each other without a person in between.
For example
, an English researcher would not need to learn Chinese in order to
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get
a piece of information from a scientist from there.
Moreover
,
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a solo
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language
would
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the financial of
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make
the trading easier than
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, and as a consequence, it will open new vacancies of work for youth.

On the other hand
, it will kill the diversity and the uniqueness of each country. The reason for
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the whole
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culture
might be similar, which would
be reflected
on the behavior and
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culture
of
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.
As a result
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see
the other’s
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culture
would
probably
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,
especially
for those countries, which depend on tourism as a major source of income. If there is no variety in
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language
and
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cultures
, the
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world
will suffer a lot in
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many
aspects such as economy and difference.

In conclusion
, although
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has
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positives, there are
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a lot of
negatives that should
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IELTS academic advantages and disadvantages of having only English language

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280 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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