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Plans of the university sports center

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The diagrams demonstrate detailed information about the present plan of the University sports center and the future plan of the university sports center. After a rigorous coercion the present plan of the university sports center I can see two outdoor courts and central building, The outdoor courts is on the west and on the east side of the university sports center. The central building is located in the middle of the plan. I can see reception is on the south of the central building. The gym is located on the north of the central building. There is pool, which is located in the middle of the building. The length of the pool is twenty five meters. Changing room is on the west of the pool. Seating is on the east side of the pool. After detailed review the future plan of the University sports center I can see thirteen objects on the plan. Reception is opposite the entrance. The sports shop and changing room is going to be on the west of reception. The café and the other changing room is on the east of reception. The leisure pool is located on the west side of the plan. The two dance studious and sports hall are located on the east side of the plan. There is a pool, which is located in the middle of the plan. The length of the pool is twenty five meters. Gym is on the north of the pool. The third changing room is on the west of the pool. The seating is located on the east of the pool. Finally, after a thorough coercion of two plans surely I can say every difference between present plan and the future plan of the University sports center. There will be many changes in the structure of the bulding.
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sports
center and the future
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university
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center.

After a rigorous coercion the present
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plan
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university
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sports
center I can
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two outdoor courts and
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central
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building
, The outdoor courts is on the west and on the east side of the
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university
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sports
center. The
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central
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building
is
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located
in the middle of the
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plan
. I can
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see
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reception
is on the south of the
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central
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building
. The gym is
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located
on the north of the
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central
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building
. There is
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pool
, which is
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located
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building
. The length of the
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pool
is
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twenty five
meters.
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Changing
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room
is on the west of the
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pool
. Seating is on the east side of the pool.

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University
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sports
center I can
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thirteen objects on the
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plan
.
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Reception
is opposite the entrance. The
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sports
shop and
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changing
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room
is going to be on the west of
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reception
. The café and the other
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room
is on the east of
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reception
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The
leisure
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pool
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located
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plan
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two dance studious and
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hall are
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located
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. There is a
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pool
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. The length of the
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pool
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twenty five
meters. Gym is on the north of the
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pool
. The third
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changing
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room
is on the west of the
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pool
. The seating is
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located
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Finally
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plans
surely
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plan
and the future
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University
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sports
center. There will be
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IELTS academic Plans of the university sports center

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  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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