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The table below shows the production of milk and new all info country in 2005 to 2010.

The table below shows the production of milk and new all info country in 2005 to 2010. Wn3L5
The table illustrate the information about the selling of milk in the Netherlands, Australia and Guatemala between 1990 and 2010 the skill is in litters. Overall it can be clearly seen that, the highest production of milk was neither lands and least observed in Guatemala over the given period time. To begin with, the number of milk production in Netherland was 11 in 1990 but it had significantly in inclined to 22 in 2015 that there was a gradual decrease and noticed to 1140000 in 2010. moreover, in 1919 the figure of Australian which was around 11 in 2020, and then it dropped drametically from 11 to 29 between 2000 and 2010. On the other hand, Guatemala and Tanzania their milk production from 87 and 26 in 1919 to 15 and 84 respectively in 2010. Additionally, the least production of milk was Gautam throughout the period.
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