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The outlines beneath illustrate the breeze age all over the planet and the level of power produced by wind generation by different nations.

The outlines beneath illustrate the breeze age all over the planet and the level of power produced by wind generation by different nations. PkBld
The outlines beneath illustrate the breeze age all over the planet and the level of power produced by wind generation by different nations. Overall, China and India have generated most of the proportion of wind power in 2011 and the largest wind energy created throughout the years is 2020. In the pie outline, China's and India's wind power take about the portion on the level of the energy made on the planet at 46%. But differently, the USA created the least wind energy of the seven pieces of the pie diagram (6. 8%) which is twice just about as less as in Spain (12, 2%) and a few less than Germany (9. 3%). The rest are a portion of the European nations and the remainder of the world taking around a quarter of the outline. Regarding the bar chart, 2020 reached the significant number of gigawatts at over 1000. Aside from that, the breeze power created in 2000 is close to none. As low as 2005, yet has had a little ascent. But in 2011, the same year as in the pie graph, that alternative power has increased significantly to about 300 gigawatts, and then a boom in 2020 of wind electricity created reached that huge amount as told above. To conclude, China and India took over the proportion of the wind power generated in 2011 and reached an enormous amount of electricity in 2020.
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in 2011 and the largest
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energy
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In the pie outline, China's and India's
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take about the portion on the level of the energy made on the planet at 46%.
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energy of the seven pieces of the pie diagram (6. 8%) which is twice
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in Spain (12, 2%) and a few less than Germany (9. 3%). The rest are a portion of the European nations and the remainder of the world taking around a quarter of the outline.

Regarding the bar chart, 2020 reached the significant number of gigawatts at over 1000. Aside from that, the breeze
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power
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in 2000 is close to none. As low as 2005,
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ascent.
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in 2011, the same year as in the pie graph, that alternative
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has increased
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to about 300 gigawatts, and then a boom in 2020 of
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electricity
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generated in 2011 and reached an enormous amount of electricity in 2020.
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IELTS academic The outlines beneath illustrate the breeze age all over the planet and the level of power produced by wind generation by different nations.

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