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The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below

The line graph compares the number of visitors in Malaysia and Dubai between 1995 and 2003. Both these countries received more tourists in 2003 than they did in 1995 and Dubai’s share of travelers went higher than that of Malaysia despite a reverse scenario in early years. According to the illustration, the number of tourists who visited Malaysia in 1995 was 0. 1 million, more than double than that of Dubai. The visitors in Malaysia kept on increasing extremely swiftly till 2000 when it attracted more than a quarter tourist. On the contrary, Dubai, despite a decline in 1996, managed to attract more vacationers and had almost the same number of individuals visiting there in 2000 as it was in Malaysia. Next year, both of their tourists’ number went up on the contrary afterwards Dubai had been more successful in getting more visitors than Malaysia did. In 2003, four hundred thousand people travelled to Dubai, an overwhelming rise than that of 1995, while Malaysia managed to attract fewer than 250 thousand vacationers, which was roughly 2. 5 (times) than that of 1995.

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