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THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW HOW HOME SMOKERY WORKS. SUMMARIZE TEH INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELVANT.

THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW HOW HOME SMOKERY WORKS. SUMMARIZE TEH INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELVANT. LbA0K
THE PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS STEPS INVOLVED IN THE WOKRING OF HOME SMOKERY INSTALLED IN A HOME. OVERALL, THERE ARE THREE MAIN STEPS (AIR VENTILATION, BURINIG OF WOOD AND COOKING). IT BEGIIN FROM AIR VENTS AND ENDS WITH THE COOKED FOOD. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, HOME SMOKERY SYSTEM IS CONSTRUCTED UNDER GROUND LEVEL. FIRST OF ALL, THE LID OF FIRST BOX IS OPENED FOR OBTAINING FRSH AIR FROM ABOVE GROUND THEN, THE AIR MOVES TO FIRE BOX WHERE, THE WOODEN LOG ARE BURNED FOR HEATING AND COOKING PROCESS. AT THIS STEP, AIR PLAN AN ESSENTIAL ROLE IN BURNING AS IT PROVIDES SUFFICIENT OXYGEN TO FIRE. THE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN COOKING PROCESS, THE SMOKE MOVES THROUGH A PIPE WHICH, IS CONNECTED FROM FIRE PLACE. THE BOX IS PLACED ON ABOVE GROUND IN THIS, FOOD IS HANGED ON HOOK TO COOK ON SMOKE AT CERTAIN TEMPERATURE. FINALLY, THE MEAL IS READY TO BE SERVED.
THE PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS STEPS INVOLVED IN THE
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WOKRING
OF HOME
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SMOKERY
INSTALLED IN A HOME.

OVERALL
, THERE ARE THREE MAIN STEPS
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(AIR
VENTILATION,
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BURINIG
OF WOOD AND COOKING). IT
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BEGIIN
FROM
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AIR
VENTS AND ENDS WITH THE COOKED FOOD.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, HOME
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SMOKERY
SYSTEM
IS CONSTRUCTED
UNDER GROUND LEVEL.
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FIRST OF ALL
, THE LID OF
FIRST
BOX
IS OPENED
FOR OBTAINING FRSH
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AIR
FROM ABOVE GROUND THEN, THE
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AIR
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MOVES
TO FIRE BOX WHERE, THE WOODEN LOG
ARE BURNED
FOR HEATING AND COOKING PROCESS. AT THIS STEP,
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AIR
PLAN AN ESSENTIAL ROLE IN BURNING AS IT PROVIDES SUFFICIENT OXYGEN TO FIRE.

THE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN COOKING PROCESS, THE SMOKE
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MOVES
THROUGH A PIPE WHICH,
IS CONNECTED
FROM FIRE PLACE. THE BOX
IS PLACED
ON ABOVE GROUND IN THIS, FOOD
IS HANGED
ON HOOK TO COOK ON SMOKE AT CERTAIN TEMPERATURE.
FINALLY
, THE MEAL IS READY TO
BE SERVED
.
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IELTS academic THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW HOW HOME SMOKERY WORKS. SUMMARIZE TEH INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELVANT.

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