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The number of cars manufactured between 2020 to 2025

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The line chart illustrates the number of cars produced between 2020 and 2035. Overall, It is evaluated that there will be a significantly decrease in 2035, and the number of cars manufactured in Japan plummed. In contrast, predictions show that the number of cars produced in China will rise slightly. In 2025, it is forcaste that there will be a moderate increase from 350 to 370 of the number of cars produced in Japan and from 100 to 120 in China. In the next ten years, the quantity of cars produced estimated a slight growth to 150 in China, but a dramatic fall from 370 to 100 in Japan. Nevertheless, evaluations shows that the poportion of cars produced will decrease steadily from 300 to 200 in USA and from 200 to approximately 180 in UK. Ten years later, both UK and USA anticipated that the figure of cars produced will drop gradually around from 190 to 40
The line chart illustrates the
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between 2020 and 2035.

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that there will be a
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significantly decrease
in 2035, and the
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manufactured in Japan
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plummed
.
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in China will rise
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forcaste
that there will be a moderate increase from 350 to 370 of the
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in Japan and from 100 to 120 in China.
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In
the
next
ten years, the quantity of
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produced
estimated a slight growth to 150 in China,
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a dramatic fall from 370 to 100 in Japan.

Nevertheless
, evaluations
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shows
that the
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poportion
of
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cars
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will decrease
steadily
from 300 to 200
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in USA
and from 200 to approximately 180 in UK. Ten years later, both UK and USA anticipated that the figure of
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will drop
gradually
around from 190 to 40
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IELTS academic The number of cars manufactured between 2020 to 2025

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