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Highest level of education

Highest level of education NwOM0
The pie charts depicts the highest level of education of women in some land between 1945 and 1995. ok According to the charts, women who did not go to school in 1995 had been decreased significantly rather than those in 1945. The percentages between 1945 and 1995 were 35% and 0%, respectively. Moreover, in 1945, one-third of women in someland did not finish their elementary school, different from 1995 since all the women finished their elementary school. Women who done their last level education in elementary school in 1945 were small minority while in 1995 all women had already finished their elementary school, as we can see from the chart in 1945 there were 15% women who finished the year 6, different from 1995 all women has already graduated from their primary education. Five decades later, the total women who graduated from master degree had a lot of improvement. In 1995, women who finished the master degree increased by 20%. Similarly, compared to those in 1995, in 1945, women who finished their first degree only 1%. For the final year percentage in 1995 had grown significantly by 16%. In conclusion, women made up the largest percentage for bachelor degree and also from the chart that has been given.
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depicts the highest level of education of
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in
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land between 1945 and 1995.
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According to the
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,
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women
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did not go to
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in 1995 had
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did not finish their
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elementary
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,
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from 1995 since all the
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elementary
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Women
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done their last level education in
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elementary
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in 1945 were
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minority while in 1995 all
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women
had already
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in 1945 there were 15%
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the year 6,
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from 1995 all
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has already graduated from their primary education.

Five decades later, the total
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graduated from master
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had
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improvement. In 1995,
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women
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the master
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increased by 20%.
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1%. For the final year percentage in 1995 had grown
significantly
by 16%.

In conclusion
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made up the largest percentage for bachelor
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IELTS academic Highest level of education

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