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The number of books read at burnaby public library.

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The given line graph demonstrates the information about the number of books read by men and women at burnaby public library between the year 2011 and 2014. From the overall analysis, it is noticeable that the highest number of books were read by men compared to women over the given time period. As it is crystal clear from the graph that more than 4000 books were read by men in 2011. In 2012 and 2013, it was steadly increased by 10000 books. In 2014, the ratio was again inclined and reached at peak point with 14000 books. Moving further, in the case of women, women read maximum number of books than men that was 3000 in 2011 and increased steadly with 10000 books in 2013. Then it was declined by 8000 books in 2014.
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burnaby
public library between the year 2011 and 2014.

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overall
analysis, it is noticeable that the highest number of
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were
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compared to
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over the
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from the graph that more than 4000
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were
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by
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men
in 2011. In 2012 and 2013, it was
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steadly
increased by 10000
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books
. In 2014, the ratio was again inclined and reached at peak point with 14000 books.

Moving
further
, in the case of
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women
,
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women
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maximum number of
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than
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men
that was 3000 in 2011 and increased
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in 2013. Then it
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IELTS academic The number of books read at burnaby public library.

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