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The maps below show the village of Stockeford in 1986 and present time

The maps below show the village of Stockeford in 1986 and present time 2xrJ6
The provided maps give information about past and present conditions and changes of the village which is located along the River Stock over the period of 35 years. Overall, it can be seen that the village has been modernized. Instead of livestocks and farmlands have been built service and living houses for residents. According to the present map, it is noticeable building of residental houses on the both sides of the road and rebuilding of school. In order to creat the convinience for the population new roads have been built from the main road. Instead of Garden have been built 5 semi- detached Retirement home. In addition, there were 3 semi- detached building Large house in the Garden. Following to the past map, the River Stock, Bridge and post office is remained as original. In sum up, the East side of the river transformed into a modern town.
The provided maps give information about past and present conditions and
changes
of the village which
is located
along the River Stock over the period of 35 years.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that the village has
been modernized
.
Instead
of
livestocks
and farmlands have
been built
service and living
houses
for residents.

According to the present map, it is noticeable building of
residental
houses
on the both sides of the road and rebuilding of school. In order to
creat
the
convinience
for the population new roads have
been built
from the main road.
Instead
of Garden have
been built
5 semi- detached Retirement home.
In addition
, there were 3 semi- detached building Large
house
in the Garden.

Following to the past map, the River Stock, Bridge and post office
is remained
as original. In sum up, the East side of the river transformed into a modern town.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the village of Stockeford in 1986 and present time

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