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The given diagram illustrates the information in 2008 regarding us energy consumption by fuel from 1980 to 2030

The given diagram illustrates the information in 2008 regarding us energy consumption by fuel from 1980 to 2030 kL5AW
The given diagram illustrates the information regarding USA energy consumption by fuel in 1980 to 2030. Overall, the consumption of fuel in USA is increased in the past in 1980 to 2020 the the level of petrol and cal natural gas were fluctuating. In 2025 to 2013 in future 2025 to 2030 it will be up to and down. The level of and call natural gas nuclear solar wind and hydrops. Firstly in 90 80 to 2000 20 the la la for energy consumption by fuel is increased slightly petrol and coal natural gas it had been increased the highest level this is a biggest problem that time in the USA a the conjunction of energy whereas I would talk about regarding to this situation because it's very complicated the level of energy consumption was slightly fluctuating in day by day. Secondly in 2025 to 2013 it will never stop in the future it will increase and is cause the and now I meant and effect the level of patrol because the patrol ratio add in will be increased and call are also increased but the level of nuclear biodegreetable will be decrease in the future ratio of point 7 it create biggest problem in the future.
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diagram illustrates the information regarding USA
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energy
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consumption
by fuel in 1980 to 2030.
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consumption
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increased
in the past in 1980 to 2020
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the the
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level
of petrol and cal natural gas were fluctuating. In 2025 to 2013 in
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future
2025 to 2030 it will be up to and down. The
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level
of and call natural gas nuclear solar wind and
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hydrops
.
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in 90 80 to 2000 20 the la la for
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energy
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consumption
by fuel is
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increased
slightly
petrol and coal natural gas it had been
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increased
the highest
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level
this is
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a
biggest problem that time in the USA
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a the
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energy
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regarding to
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level
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energy
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consumption
was
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fluctuating in day by day.
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in 2025 to 2013 it will never
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stop
in the
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future
it will increase and is cause the and
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now
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level
of patrol
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because
the patrol ratio
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add
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increased
and call are
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increased
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level
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biodegreetable
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future
ratio of point 7 it
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IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates the information in 2008 regarding us energy consumption by fuel from 1980 to 2030

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