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the method of dealing with waste in four countries

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The given bar graph shows the information about the percentage of waste disposed using various methods in the Netherlands, Italy, Spain, and UK. Overall, the majority of the waste in the UK, Italy, and Spain were landfilled while Netherlands recycled a large amount of their waste. The majority of the waste (around 65 percent) was landfilled in the UK, while in Italy and Spain this method was used for disposing 40% waste. However, in Netherlands landfilling was used only for 8% of wastes. The most used method of dealing with waste was recycling in the Netherlands at an amount of around 68 percent. On the other hand, this method was used only for an average of 12 percent in the UK and Spain and slightly higher in Italy. . The percentage of waste burnt in the Netherlands was 10 percent but the amount was 30 percent in Spain. Around 22 percent of waste was burned in Italy, compared to roughly 5 percent in the UK. The percentage of waste used as chemicals was the same for the UK, Italy and Spain which was around 18 percent but for the Netherlands it was 3 percent lesser compared to other countries.
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disposed using various
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in the Netherlands, Italy, Spain, and UK.
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in the UK, Italy, and Spain were
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recycled a large amount of their waste.

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in the UK, while in Italy and Spain this
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for disposing 40%
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in Netherlands
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for 8% of wastes.

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of dealing with
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was recycling in the Netherlands at an amount of
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in the UK and Spain and
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burnt in the Netherlands was 10
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the amount was 30
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in Spain.
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of
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was burned
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in the UK. The percentage of
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as chemicals was the same for the UK, Italy and Spain which was
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for the Netherlands it was 3
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lesser compared to other countries.
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IELTS academic the method of dealing with waste in four countries

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