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The maps shows how Sidney international airport was in 1930 and how it is today.

The maps shows how Sidney international airport was in 1930 and how it is today. r89pk
The provided maps demonstrate the information about the alters that have taken place in Sydnay International Airport since 1930. Overall, it is crystal clear that the Sydnay International Airport has undergone various changes during the time period of over 91 years. To begin with, in 1930, the airport was relatively small and had one terminal as well as one runway, which can be seen in the centre of the airport. Further, the road to Sydney towards the north. Apart from this, on the south side, there was a boston bay, and the river was on the west side. Moving further, in the present time, the airport has totally changed. Terminal has been converted into international terminal, and there are three runways in the present time. Moreover, runway 1 is on the same place, but runway 2 has consructed between the international terminal and boston bay. The runway 3 has built between domestic terminal and boston bay. Besides this, next to the runway 1, there is a domestic terminal. The road has been extended from canberra. In addition, in the present time, there are two car parks towards the north. The river is on the same place, however close to the runway 2, hotel has been constructed there.
The provided maps demonstrate the information about the alters that have taken place in
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Sydnay
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International
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Airport
since 1930.

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, it is crystal
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clear
that the
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Sydnay
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International
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Airport
has undergone various
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changes
during the
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time
period of over 91 years.

To
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begin
with, in 1930, the
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was
relatively
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small
and had one
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terminal
as well
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runway
, which can be
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seen
in the
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centre
of the
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.
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, the road to Sydney towards the north. Apart from this, on the south side, there was a
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boston
bay, and the river was on the west side.

Moving
further
, in the present
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time
, the
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airport
has
totally
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changed
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international
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terminal
, and there are three
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runways
in the present
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,
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1 is on the same place,
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2 has
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consructed
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international
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terminal
and
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boston
bay. The
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runway
3 has built between domestic
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terminal
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boston
bay.
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1, there is a domestic
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. The road has
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canberra
.
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, there are two car parks towards the north. The river is on the same place,
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2, hotel has
been constructed
there.
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