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The maps show the village park 10 years ago and the village car park now.

The maps show the village park 10 years ago and the village car park now. XGdmr

The provided outlines depict the developments that have taken place in a village park over a period of decade. Overall, it is explicitly apparent that the whole village has experienced a significant modernization and much more crowded than before. Total area of the park is the same, but many things have been added and functionality of the park has improved. Although the entrance is still in the same position with ten years ago, a new cycle path has been constructed surround the village. The location of the tennis courts also remain unchanged, but there is a double increase in the number of courts. The football pitch and the car park both have been enlarged, especially the car park now can be used for 50 people instead of 20. Moreover, the woods have been demolished and replaced by new facilities including toilets and cafe. A children's park and a children's soft play area have been built in the place which used to belong to children's play area. Finally, the pound in the bottom of the map has been converted into a boating lake and a total new picnic area has been erected

The provided outlines depict the developments that have taken place in a village You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 over a period of decade.

Overall
, it is explicitly
 apparent that the whole village has experienced a significant modernization and much more crowded than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. Total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is the same, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 and functionality of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
.

Although the entrance is still
 in the same position with ten years ago, a new cycle path has been constructed
 surround the village. The location of the tennis courts also
 remain unchanged, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there is a double increase in the number of courts. The football pitch and the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 both have been enlarged
, especially
 the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for 50 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
instead
 of 20.

Moreover
, the woods have been demolished
 and replaced by new facilities including toilets and 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. A children's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and a children's soft play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 have been built
 in the place which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to belong to children's play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Finally
, the pound in the bottom of the map has been converted
 into a boating lake and a total new picnic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been erected