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The pie chart below shows the funds allocated to various sports by the Thahir Sports Academy in the year 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the funds allocated to various sports by the Thahir Sports Academy in the year 1990 and 2000. yGwdE
The chart depicted here represents the money assigned to 4 different types of sports (Cricket, Football, Hockey, and other games) by the Thahir sports academy during 1990 and 2000. In both these years, the highest amount of funds was devoted to Cricket with 60% of the fund in 1990 and 40% in 2000. Whereas the lowest amount of money was reserved for other sports category, but while comparing the chart there is an increase in the fund by 5% in the year 2000. Apart from this the fund allocated for a Football game is 30% in 2000 and 12% in 1990. Here we can interpret that there is raise in the amount by 18% over these decades. The opposite kind of observation was found in Hockey sport, where the amount distributed for this game is declined by 3% within these ten years. Finally, we can conclude that more importance is given to Cricket sport and the least importance to other sports.
The chart depicted here represents the money assigned to 4
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academy during 1990 and 2000. In both these years, the highest
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in 1990 and 40% in 2000. Whereas the lowest
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category,
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while comparing the chart there is an increase in the
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fund
by 5% in the year 2000.

Apart from this the
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allocated for a Football game is 30% in 2000 and 12% in 1990. Here we can interpret that there is raise in the
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amount
by 18% over these decades. The opposite kind of observation
was found
in Hockey
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, where the
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distributed for this game
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by 3% within these ten years.
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, we can conclude that more importance is
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the funds allocated to various sports by the Thahir Sports Academy in the year 1990 and 2000.

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