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The map below shows the office building now and future .

The map below shows the office building now and future. XDR8w
A glance at the layouts exhibit its current structure and its future expansion. From an overall perception, the radical alterations will take place in the office building, and converting into more functional. By adding, kitchen and meeting area. Among a myriad of changes which will take place in the west and east side. One of the most spectacular modification will occur in the north area where a kitchen, a canteen care located which will be converted with two offices.
A glance at the layouts exhibit its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
structure and its future expansion.

From an
overall
perception, the radical alterations will take place in the office building, and converting into more functional. By adding, kitchen and meeting area.

Among a myriad of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
which will take place in the west and east side. One of the most spectacular modification will occur in the north area where a kitchen, a canteen care located which will
be converted
with two offices.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the office building now and future.

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3 paragraphs
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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