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The graph shows the amount of sales end expenses in a particular country.

The graph shows the amount of sales end expenses in a particular country. gxaMl

Time on the horizontal axis is plotted against the amount of sales and expenses on the vertical axis. From the statistics, it can be inferred that, sales witnessed a substantial rise towards the end of the survey, while expenses were characterized by a marked fall. In January, spending accounted for 7 million compared to sales, with 1 million respectively. The month of June marks the point at which expenses were overtaken by sales, which was overwhelmingly greater than the amount of the former year. The most outstanding feature can be seen in sales since June onwards, which was most fluctuating, falling from 7 million down to 6 dollars in August, rapidly climaxed to 7 before once again deteriorating to around 6. 6 after recording a plateau. And then finished at 7 million accordingly. Moving on to expenses, they experienced a period of erratic behavior after some mild fluctuations and ended at just under 6 million in December.

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. The month of June marks the point at which expenses were overtaken
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, which was overwhelmingly
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 down to 6 dollars in August, rapidly
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before
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