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Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Vx96
The two maps illustrate the modifications that will be added to the municipal center: the first map shows the present center, the second shows the plan for the new center. overall, it is clear that the center will witness remarkable changes when the plan is applied. There are 5 main differences between the existing map and the future center It is clear that the 2 car park from the upper left corner and the upper right corner will be demolished to make way for the theatre and hotel and restaurant respectively. The concert hall will not be removed, similarly, the shopping center is and will be located at the upper right corner, alongside with the car park in the existing map or the hotel in the future plan. the exhibition hall will witness a removal from the lower left corner to the lower right corner of the map to make room for the council office. Finally, an open park and an underground car park will be erected in place of the council office.
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illustrate the modifications that will be
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the present center, the second
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that the center will witness remarkable
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. There are 5 main differences between the existing
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map
and the future
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center


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that the 2 car
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from the upper
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and the upper right
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way for the
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theatre
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. The concert hall will not
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, the shopping center is and will
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in the existing
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map
or the hotel in the future plan.

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the
exhibition hall will witness a removal from the lower
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left
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to the lower right
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of the
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to
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make
room for the council office.
Finally
, an open
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park
and an underground car
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will
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in place of the council office.
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IELTS academic Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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